the beginning of the paper the thesis tends toward more description than argument, leading. The problem is stated, but lacks detail. uSE OF sources, documentation, all source material is used and smoothly integrated into the text. Some suggestions for change are evident. mAIN points, body Paragraphs, refutation. Many unclear or incomplete sentences. Well developed introductory paragraph contains detailed background information, a clear explanation or definition of the problem, and a thesis statement.
Background details are a seemingly random collection of information, unclear, or not related to the topic. Work contains structural weaknesses and franchise business plan grammatical errors. Conclusion summarizes main topics, but is repetitive. Introduction states the thesis but does not adequately explain the background of the problem. . Refutation paragraph missing and/or vague.
Research is solidly within the parameters of the analysis and thesis argument. Include argument, informative and narrative rubrics.
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